頭馬的這個項目主要是介紹頭馬的導(dǎo)師制度，向傾聽者介紹頭馬導(dǎo)師制度是如何運作的。此前已經(jīng)做過一次演講，但是因為只是堆砌、沒有細節(jié)和邏輯因此就被毫不留情地判斷為失敗了。
因為失敗了，所以再做一次是帶著一點點恐懼和害怕的。于是，請教了sissy如何修改演講文稿內(nèi)容，讓william發(fā)了他寫的演講稿給我看，讓daisy發(fā)了同個項目的演講稿給我看。還因為過分緊張，連做夢的時候仿佛都在演練。
即使是有點恐懼和害怕，我的演講稿也是等到最后一天的下午才寫好。寫好后，只是在心里記下大概的提綱。在上場前不斷安慰自己，就是自然而然地去表達之前mentor對我的一些輔導(dǎo)，一定要注意細節(jié)。
沒想到，演講效果特別好，幾個人都說很感人。這是我此前意想不到的。原來發(fā)自內(nèi)心的情感是真的可以感染到別人的。也許我本身也有一些散發(fā)個人情感的潛能。
這一次演講學(xué)到的點，演講的主題只要聚焦一個就行，不要多。在演講的過程中，也要盡量讓句子簡短，不要超過1行半。細節(jié)的體現(xiàn)在于盡可能細地描述一件事情。
以下是演講文稿，實際演講內(nèi)容跟這里有所不同。
I still remembered that horrible moment when I stand in front of 30 person to make a self-introduction. My leg was shaking. My voice was to low to be heard. I can’t even say my name out load and almost burst into crying because of nervous.
However, everything has changed until I met my mentor-Bonnie in SYSU MED.
She empower me
“You can do it! You are an elegant and beautiful girl. Just be the way you are. I trust in you.”? No one has ever encourage me as Bonnie do. She also told me that when I am nervous, just ignore the audience and look into the distance. In order to help me to prepare my first speech, Bonnie give a lot of advice about my article. With Bonnie’s word and encouragement, I suddenly have the courage and determination to overcome my fear of standing on the stage. The first speech, the second speech, the third speech……I finally conquer my fear.
She challenge me
Bonnie’s encouragement not only gave me the courage to come to the stage, but also grow confidence in my mind. Table topic speech is what I am most afraid of. Whenever I get a topic, my head will be blank. I told Bonnie my distress, and she said, If you are afraid of table topic speech, why don’t you try rainbow table topic. You would feel not so nervous when you do it online. Don’t to be strict on yourself. You are already doing good. So I sign up for every rainbow table topic session. It was Bonnie who evaluated my first speech. She also give me a lot of encouragement. Your voice are so melody. I love your speech especially the ending. The sentence you used is really amazing. That was the first time I trust in myself that I can do table topic speech. From then on, I even got the best speaker twice.
She told me to stay hungry
I am also very upset about my pronunciation and the lack of vocabulary. Bonnie ,who always love to encourage me, start to encourage me again. Don’t be afraid. The reason why we join toastmaster is that we are not the perfect one we want us to be. We can always have chance to learn from others. Here are some videos about brilliant speeches. We can learn together. She help me to analyze every sentence they say in their speech and share lots of knowledge with me. But she also told me that active learning is the most important and always stay hungry, stay foolish.
Thanks to Bonnie, from a girl who dared not speak in public, to a girl who stand on the stage. From a girl who had no faith in herself, to a girl who seized every opportunity to giving speech. From a girl who were lazy for learning to a girl who love learning and sharing all the time.
Even though I am still not good at giving speech, but with bonnie’s encouragement, all I need to do is practicing and receive feedback to improve myself. I think that’s the meaning of mentorship.
