Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that today the Internet is playing an important role in education, with increasing range and availability of online courses. But I think it is ridiculous to claim that this will lead to the disappearance of traditional schools.
中間段落的結(jié)構(gòu): Topic sentence + developing sentences
注意每一個中間段落必須有一個topic sentence,這個topic sentence點明話題，同時指明這個段落要講的內(nèi)容。
接下來給出2個topic sentence （一般寫2-4個，3個最常見）
1. Firstly, it is doubted that students can learn as efficiently on the Internet at home as in traditional schools.
2. Apart from academic education, school education also creates opportunities for students to gain many valuable social skills.
接下來展開以上兩個topic sentences.
在議論的寫作中，topic sentence的展開常用兩種辦法:1.舉例子； 2：講道理
講道理常用兩種辦法:1.解釋原因； 2. 闡述結(jié)果；偶爾使用第三種:作對比
范例
1. Firstly, it is doubted that students can learn as efficiently on the Internet at home as in traditional schools. One property of modern technology is harmful to any learning mind – it distracts. When learners are searching for information online, the Internet provides them with not only relevant results to make use of, but also external links to click. By contrast, ?in schools there are teachers supervising them, like checking their attendance, and managing their performance during classes. Also, there are peers with whom students can discuss when they encounter problems in study. (93 words. Topic sentence+ 解釋網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)效率不高的原因+ 對比，學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)效率高的原因)
2. Apart from academic education, school education also creates opportunities for students to gain many valuable social skills. Teachers educate large groups of students together, which means that they must train students to work with their peers and respect other members of the class. Students also learn to behave sensibly in lessons, regardless of the distractions around them, and to follow instructions given to them by teaching staff. These behavioural skills will be crucial in later life. In the workplace, for example, adults are expected to work in teams, listen to each other, and follow the instructions of a manager or company director. (102 words, topic sentence+ social skills的列舉+ 這些skills的好處是什么)
