以下是一個(gè)雅思小作文地圖題(今昔對(duì)比類)的通用模板,括號(hào)內(nèi)為可替換內(nèi)容提示:
第一段:改寫題目(Introduction)
The maps illustrate (how [地點(diǎn)名稱] has changed/developed/ transformed) from (年份/時(shí)間A) to (年份/時(shí)間B).
第二段:總體概述(Overview)
Overall, (the area has undergone significant/considerable/dramatic changes). (The most notable changes) include (the construction of.../the removal of.../the expansion of...). While (some features remained unchanged), (the area has become more residential/commercial/ industrial/recreational).
第三段:過去的情況(Past/Before)
In (年份A), (地點(diǎn)) was (largely rural/undeveloped/residential). (To the north/south/east/west), there (was/were) (a river/a forest/ residential houses/a main road). (In the center/in the northwestern corner), (stood a small village/there was a large factory). (Transportation was limited to) (a single main road/a narrow path). (The area was characterized by) (green spaces/farmland/few facilities).
第四段:現(xiàn)在的變化(Present/After/Changes)
(By/In) (年份B), (significant developments had taken place). (The most striking change is that) (the forest was cleared to make way for) (a housing estate/a shopping center). (A new road bridge) (was constructed across the river to connect...). (To the east), (the original houses were demolished and replaced by) (high-rise apartment blocks). (A roundabout was built at the intersection of...). (Additionally/Furthermore), (a new hospital/school/park was established in the southern part). (The previous industrial area has been converted into) (a recreational zone).
第五段:總結(jié)(可選,視字?jǐn)?shù)而定)
In summary, (the transformation reflects urbanization/ modernization). (The area has evolved from) (a quiet rural village) (into a bustling urban center).
常用句型與詞匯
位置描述 in the northeast corner / to the south of / adjacent to / opposite / alongside
變化描述 was replaced by / was transformed into / was converted to / gave way to
新建 was constructed / was built / was established / was developed
拆除/消失 was demolished / was removed / was cleared / disappeared / was knocked down
擴(kuò)建 was expanded / was extended / was enlarged / doubled in size
保持不變 remained unchanged / stayed the same / was retained / was preserved
寫作要點(diǎn)提示
1. 時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確:過去用一般過去時(shí),現(xiàn)在用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
2. 方位清晰:使用明確的方位詞(north/south/east/west/central)
3. 邏輯順序:可按順時(shí)針/逆時(shí)針方向描述,或按變化大小排序
4. 對(duì)比突出:善用 while, whereas, however 等對(duì)比連接詞
