Part One ? ?修改

1. 修改前反思

（1）過多強調時間（4次）催促的意味比較重，讀者會感受到壓力，怎么改？

（2）為了使用新學的短語 行文不夠簡潔

? (3) ?層次上應該先問對方進度怎樣 還是先闡明催促理由？

2. 修改后

Dear Joseph,

How have you been ？

Just trying to check in with you regarding where we are on that display board Henry left us last week. It is an urgent order that required on April 17th. To make that goal possible, we probably need to deliver the electronic version file to our advertising agency before April 15th. The earlier the board can be printed, the better. Hence, I am wondering if you could send me the proposed photos tomorrow. In that case, I would work out the layout in time.

Also, I am happy to coordinate any assistance you might need.

Yours,

Sophie