托福寫作練筆: Buy a house or a business?

On the way of life, there are many crossroads where we have to make a choice. Making a right decision can sometimes change one’s whole life. With enough money to purchase either a house or a business, I will buy a business as my option without hesitation.

In my eyes, houses are for people who need to settle down. Almost everyone can have a house in which they can relax and enjoy family life. People usually feel comfortable if they have a good place to dwell. However, there are still a lot of people who are homeless. Therefore, If I use my money to purchase a business, maybe I can make more money which can be used to help those poor people to live a better life.

I am also a risk taker who is eager for a challenging and adventurous life. Staying in a house is truly a good way to get rid of tiring work, but for a young person like me, starting a business and make a difference is more enchanting. I can get to know more about the world of business, and some talented people in this field. These will be my cherished merits gained from the experience of business.

Furthermore, I think to rent a house is a very proper choice for me rather than to buy one. Because of my business, I might usually go on a business trip to other cities and even countries, and I have to stay there for several months. I think I just need a place to live in, so to rent for a short period of time is a more wonderful idea than to buy a house in a certain place.

On the whole, I think it is a fantastic option for me to buy a business. More things to gain, more people to meet, more experience to acquire, more possibility to help others. These things will make my life delightful and meaningful.

插播: 最近休假,沒事學(xué)學(xué)托福,想把185個獨立寫作題目都拿來練練。每篇規(guī)定自己限時半小時完成,寫好了拿給我家元公子看。這家伙先給我發(fā)糖吃:寫得好棒,語言流暢,觀點鮮明,用詞準(zhǔn)確。正當(dāng)我要飛上天際之時,元公子給我來了幾句:

境界欠缺,論據(jù)可以更深,第一篇,重點解釋為什么選做生意,1.因為年輕,還不想settle down,2.有理想,實現(xiàn)個人的抱負(fù)和價值,3.通過做生意,給社會帶來價值,回報社會。一開始說買房可以很舒適,這段不錯,用一句“人人都想要舒適,但舒適往往意味著平淡”來轉(zhuǎn)折。租房那一大段太low,太沒境界了。

一副好為人師要不完要不完的樣子。如果不是想到這家伙在德陽辛苦工作,真想抓起臭襪子塞到他吐不出象牙的嘴里。

不過仔細(xì)想想,元公子所說也挺中肯,不乏道理啊,建議嘛,也可采納。于是剛剛咬牙切齒抓起臭襪子的手不覺松了松,然后打開水龍頭抹起肥皂開始搓起來了。

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