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摘要：同學(xué)們?cè)谘潘即笞魑闹?，?jīng)常會(huì)一段內(nèi)容，寫兩句基本就寫不下去了。其中的原因是沒(méi)有注重拓展。下面論述雅思寫作拓展常用五大方法。

1?舉 例 說(shuō) 明

舉例子是列舉有代表性的、恰當(dāng)?shù)氖吕齺?lái)說(shuō)明事物特征的說(shuō)明方法。通過(guò)舉例子，可以把前一句的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行拓展說(shuō)明。

例句：On the other hand, young people may overlook hands-on experience if recruiters pay more attention to academic qualifications. They may not be able to cope with practical problems.For example, these new recruits do not understand how to apply theories into practice and how to work in teams to perform tasks.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：前一句說(shuō)到年輕人不能處理好實(shí)際問(wèn)題。那么下一句，用一個(gè)例子說(shuō)把這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)立起來(lái)。因?yàn)樾聛?lái)的成員不明白如何把理論運(yùn)用到實(shí)踐中和如何在團(tuán)隊(duì)中完成任務(wù)。

2?名 詞 解 釋

前一句如果涉及到了一些比較專業(yè)的名詞，比如高新科技（state-of-the-art technologies），比如環(huán)境方面的好處（environmental benefits）

例句：On the other hand, if car users are required to bear the cost of building or improving roads, this policy can have environmental benefits. Driving will increase the cost of living, which encourages motorists to cut down on private car use and?choose less polluting means of transport, such as public transport.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：在第一句中說(shuō)到了如果人們必須承擔(dān)道路的費(fèi)用，那么會(huì)產(chǎn)生environmental benefits，緊接著的第二句就解釋了原因。正因?yàn)檫@個(gè)政策，駕駛的費(fèi)用上升了，人們會(huì)選擇少用私家車和較少污染的出行方式，比如公共交通，比如騎行。因此，就把人們承擔(dān)道路費(fèi)用和交通對(duì)環(huán)境造成較少污染聯(lián)系在一起。

3?特 定 化

特定情況下，這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)會(huì)成立或者特別奏效，從而論證了這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。

例句：Driving will increase the cost of living, which encourages motorists to cut down on private car use and choose less polluting means of transport, such as public transport. This policy is particularly?effective for the working class, who live on a tight budget.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這個(gè)政策對(duì)那些資金緊張的上班族來(lái)說(shuō)，會(huì)非常奏效。用特定化來(lái)論證自己的觀點(diǎn)成立。

4?對(duì) 比 論 證

正所謂，沒(méi)有對(duì)比，就沒(méi)有傷害。在雅思寫作里，把反方觀點(diǎn)擊敗，就是立起正方觀點(diǎn)。

例句：Traditional games can compare favourably with modern games in terms of children's physical development. A majority of traditional games?involve outdoor activities and can provide children with more opportunities to interact with natural elements. Their physical activity will increase, so their motor skills can be improved. In contrast, modern games?are normally web-based and this is why young players spend hours in front of the screen, instead of maintaining physical activity.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：該段是支持傳統(tǒng)游戲的。但是到了第四句，通過(guò)對(duì)比現(xiàn)代游戲給兒童帶來(lái)的壞處，從而達(dá)到牢固正方觀點(diǎn)——traditional games are beneficial to children’s physical development.

5??分 類 論 證

論證過(guò)程中，可能會(huì)涉及到要用兩個(gè)分觀點(diǎn)來(lái)論證一個(gè)論點(diǎn)。我們可以采用分類的方法。

例句：On the other hand, it is necessary for authorities to launch public campaigns to raise?people's awareness of healthy lifestyle. The government can provide more fitness equipment?for people, which allows them to do physical exercise regularly. In addition, a healthy diet?should also be encouraged. These healthy habits can reduce the risk of ill-health, making people live with a satisfied mind.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：看“l(fā)aunch public campaigns to raise people's awareness of healthy lifestyle”，用推廣運(yùn)動(dòng)的形式，來(lái)增高人們的健康生活方式的意識(shí)，那么有哪些方面呢？文中提及到了，provide more fitness equipment?和a healthy diet?兩個(gè)層面。

注意：其他的moreover, what’s more建議不要用。moreover是在一件事沒(méi)有說(shuō)完,用于更進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明這事。而不是另外一個(gè)方面。在雅思寫作里，用對(duì)詞比用得天花亂墜容易拿高分。