
聲明
因英語不好而丟了臉(詳情請看我2月15日的文章《關于英文寫作刻意練習》)
故此文是練習英語用的
所以文中含有較多錯誤
感謝您的指正……
上一篇文章Friendship Lasts Forever存在的問題,感謝我的校友王熒老師指出:
原句:He had to leave the place which he lived for 15 years
修正:He had to leave the place where he lived for 15 years
原因:表示地方關系代詞
原句:turn to the left at the first cross
修正:turn to the left at the first crossroads
原因:十字路口
原句:it is the house you are looking forward
修正:it is the house you are looking for
原因:尋找
原句:The whole house filled with laughter
修正:The whole house was filled with laughter
原因:be filled with
原句:Nothing has changed, their friendships last forever.
修正:Nothing has changed. Their friendships last forever.
原因:前后為完整的句子
今日練習:看圖作文(請原諒這詭異的畫風,我選資料時沒有注意。)
Fine Feathers Make Fine Birds
Last Sunday, it was Mary's 18th birthday. So, Mary's mother decided to buy a new dress for Mary as her birthday gift.
After lunch, in the afternoon. Mary and her mother went to the clothing store. The clothing store was very big and various. It was an Italian brand named?LORO PIANA.
Mary wanted a pink dress, so she told the shop assistant to show her some pink dresses. The shop assistant quickly found out a dress for Mary.
Mary tried on the dress in the fitting room. Uh-oh, the dress was a little bit large. Although it was beautiful and cheap, Mary didn't choose it.
Then the shop assistant found out another dress for Mary. This one was beautiful, too. Mary liked it very much. However, it was quite expensive.
Mary's mother said to Mary:"Fine feathers make fine birds, it's your birthday gift, just choose the one you really like, my sweetheart."
So Mary tried on the second dress in the fitting room. Ah-ha, this dress was just right ! Mary was very excited. She chose the second dress as her birthday gift at last.
Mary was glad to have such a nice birthday gift.
中文:
人靠衣裝
上周日是Mary的18歲生日。所以她的媽媽打算買一件新的連衣裙給Mary當作生日禮物。
午飯過后,到了下午。Mary和她的媽媽去了服裝店。這家服裝店非常大并且品類多樣,它是一個意大利品牌,叫作LORO PIANA(諾悠翩雅)。
Mary想要一件粉色連衣裙,所以她讓店員向她展示一些粉色連衣裙。店員很快給Mary找出了一件。
Mary在試衣間里試穿了一下這件連衣裙。啊哦,這件連衣裙有點大,盡管它既好看又便宜,Mary還是沒有選擇它。
于是店員又給Mary找了另外一件連衣裙。這一件同樣很好看,Mary非常中意。然而,它價格不菲。
Mary的媽媽對Mary說:“人靠衣裝,這是你的生日禮物,選擇你真正喜歡的那個吧,我的寶貝兒?!?/p>
所以Mary在試衣間試穿了一下第二件連衣裙。啊哈,這件穿起來剛剛好!Mary非常激動,她最終選擇了第二件連衣裙作為她的生日禮物。
Mary很開心能擁有這樣一件精美的生日禮物。