Thomas, a 27-years-old young man ,was suffering from the torture of diabetes.but surprisingly , he decided to fight with disease and managed to create a website in order to help those people who were also diagnosed with diabetes.

I admired thomas very much after reading his story,for he really grasps the meaning of helping others .In the society ,one can’t do and complete all the things by himself,therefore the coopration and help from others are needed. Frist ,helping others means helping ourselves.if we helped others who were in trouble,they would do us a favor in return in the future.second, helping others is not only a good quality, but also a good thing .we can gain a sense of happiness by helping others.Don’t grudge your lover or help ,for helping others is just helping yourselves eventually.

Luck, a teenage boy from a single-parent family,took no notice of his mother’s difficulty in raising him .he gave himself over to video games rather than study hard and learn to be an independent man.

Luck,however,is not alone.he is only one of those who take it for granted that their parents are responsible for them in all aspects of their life. They enjoy a life with everything ready for them,some even remain dependent on their parents after graduation from college.

This,I think,is indeed their parents’?fault, over-protective parents tend to neglect to teach their children how to live on their own ,I hope such parents could realize their mistake and stop spoiling their children so that they can grow up healthily.

一：銜接前后的詞語

表示“首先”：first ,firstly, first of all, to begin with

表示“第二”：second，secondly,besides,furthermore

表示“最后”：finally ,last,lastly

二：表示總結(jié)的詞語

表示“總之”：in a word, in short , to sum up ,in conclusion ,in summary

表示“綜上所述”：from what has been discussed above,from the above analysis,from what has been mentioned above.

三：表示“最重要的是”的詞語

Most important of all ,Last but not least

“引出例證”

Therefore，from the above example

四：評價過程中，需要前后銜接的常用句式

Admittedly,……but it won’t be the case that……

They may be right in saying that……but they fail to notice that……

It is natural to believe that……since……h(huán)owever,we canot ignore

partB寫作技巧（120詞）

先認(rèn)真熟悉一遍短文，抓住主要思想，在腦海中構(gòu)建出一個框架，確定要寫的主題，然后開始給予適當(dāng)?shù)脑u價，并發(fā)表自己的見解。評價要有條理，采用銜接手法，層次清晰，行文流程，注意盡量不要使用短文中出現(xiàn)的詞語。

注重語法（時態(tài)、主謂一致、單復(fù)數(shù)、主被動）、詞匯（關(guān)聯(lián)詞、固定搭配、習(xí)慣用語）以及拼寫和標(biāo)點的正確運用。

PartA

邀請信

Dear_____,(稱呼)

????The New Year is coming soon,we will /I am going to _______________.

Would it be possible for you to meet us at/in__________(時間和地點)

We would be very happy to have you with us.

We____________________________(期待對方接受）

???????????????????????????????????????????Yours,

???????????????????????????????????????????**

求職信

Dear_____,(稱呼)

I read in the newspaper the other day that__________(職位內(nèi)容）

Now I am writing to apply for the position and I think I am quite qualified for it. I am______(應(yīng)聘人的簡單情況介紹）.I addition, I have taken many course_______(與職位相關(guān)的課程）.For further particulars, I shall be pleased to give you.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,

?????????????????????????????????????????????**

道歉信

Dear_____,(稱呼)

I am truly sorry that_____________(道歉原因）

The reason is that _______________(介紹原因）.Once again,

I am soory for any ?inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

?????????????????????????????????????????????Yours sincerely,

?????????????????????????????????????????????**

祝賀信

Dear_____,(稱呼)

I hear that __________(要祝賀的事情）.You must be very happy with it.

I am very happy for you and wish to extend to you my utmost congratulations. I believe_______(積極的評價）

???Congratulations again! ?????????????????

?????????????????????????????????????????????Yours sincerely,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????**

投訴信

Dear_____,(稱呼)

I am __________(寫信人的情況）.I am here writing to tell you that___________(投訴或者抱怨的事情）.____________(事情具體描述）.I hope____________(希望得到解決的結(jié)果和途徑）.

I look forward to your qucik reply.

?????????????????????????????????????????????Yours sincerely,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????**

感謝信

Dear_____,(稱呼)

I am ?writing this letter to thank you for___________(要感謝的事情）.I would also like to thank you for___________(要感謝的另外一件事）._______________(對要感謝的事情進(jìn)行描述）.

I would like to express my warm thanks to you!

????????????????????????????????????????Yours sincerely,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????**

便條寫作

????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Sep.20th

Peter， ????????????

I’d like to discuss with you about the concert to be held by the famous young Chinese pianist

Lang Lang on our campus.Well ,I succeeded in buying two cheapest tickets for both of us, that is, 20 Yuan each.Could we meet each other at 6:30 p.m. on the campus?Please call me if you find the time and the place are possible to you.

???See you at the concern.

????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????**

申請類

Dear Professor Dickson,

I am writing to explore the possibility of going to your university to further my studies.I am now an undergraduate in Peking University and I am going to graduate in July this years. My major is biochemistry which is in accordance with your field of research .I got A for almost all my courses up so far.

You are certainly the top expert in this field.That’s why I want to study and do some research under your guidance very much .on the one hand,I can have access to all up-to-date information.on the other hand,I can get to know some famous scientists and the most recent development in this field.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

?????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours sincerely,

??????????????????????????????????????????????????????**

通知類

????????????????????Notice

There is going to be a lecture of_____(題目）in the meeting room of the English Department

From___to____on(時間）.The lecture will be given by_____,who is from the Department of English Literature,Peking University.He will present________(內(nèi)容），which you surely will enjoy very much.All the teacher and students are welcomed to attend this lecture.

????????????????????????????????????????????????????English Department