“寫作替換詞句積累”系列從《經濟學人The Economist》、《時代周刊 Time》《連線 Wired》等著名刊物(大學四級、六級、托福及SAT題源)中提取適用于托福、雅思及SAT寫作中的替換詞句。希望能夠幫助童鞋們積累優(yōu)秀的表達,并活用到自己的作文中,優(yōu)化辭藻。
1. 今昔對比
主語, once considered + adj., is/are now + adj.
E.g. Such calamities, once considered freakish, are now commonplace.?
該句型適用于托福獨立作文中的今昔對比題,如?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. (TPO 41) 在作文首段可以改寫題目為:
Teachers, once considered respectable, are now of dubious reputation.
2. 事與愿違
It is tempting to think (長句描述) . In fact, it is (短句轉折) .
E.g. It is tempting to think these are temporary setbacks and that mankind, with its instinct for self-preservation, will muddle through to a victory over global warming. In fact, it is losing the war.?
該句型適用于分析SAT作文作者concede讓步部分,如
2016年5月北美 Eric Klinenberg, “Viewpoint: Air-Conditioning Will Be the End of Us.” ?2013 by Time Inc.?
作者在前文認可了AC的發(fā)明拯救了老人和病弱者的生命,提高了辦公室產能,確保了工廠的安全等優(yōu)點。但在后文提出 Americans need to greatly reduce their reliance on air-conditioning. 這一主旨。
由于全文兩大段在做讓步concession,多數學生分析這篇文章時會選從concession這個角度切,在分析讀者受到的影響時,可以套用該句式:
It is tempting for readers to think those are profound merits for all classes and that air-conditioning is more than a great invention. In fact, it spells much trouble.
3.除非先解決…問題,否則沒有一個解決方案會有實際效果
Yet none of these fixes/solutions will come to much unless … is tackled head on.?
E.g.?Yet none of these fixes will come to much unless climate listlessness is tackled head on.?
4. 幾個詞組
關注度在上升:Public concern is picking up.
呼吁群體意志:fire up the collective will
致力于/辛勤(研究): beaver away on sth.
前兩個詞組適用于SAT寫作中分析讀者反饋。
另,pick up 一詞多義,還有“習得” pick up a hobby;“拾取” pick up after dog 即拾取狗狗的xx
本推送中所有例句來源:
–The Economist 2018.8.4 In the line of fire - Leaders
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