第一周復(fù)盤

開頭之一: (寒暄)Thank you for taking the time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about … (寒暄)I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

對熟悉的人可以隨意點(diǎn): eg, ?Hope this message finds you doing very well. It has been a while since we met last time! How are you doing?

求專業(yè)人士指導(dǎo): Given that you have over five years of experience in this field, I would appreciate the chance to ask you a few questions about your career path and your experience in the public school system in Tennessee.

Any advice is welcome and I would especially like to hear Andrew's opinions on how to present my training experience to a future employer in person or on resume, just as you suggested.

I understand that Andrew's schedule is probably very tight: hence any amount of help he can give is very much appreciated.

委婉表達(dá)要求/聯(lián)系: (知道你忙,但希望得到指導(dǎo)/聯(lián)系)I realize that this time of year is likely a busy one for you. I am hopeful that you would be willing to speak with me over the phone or via email at some point during the next two weeks. Please let me know if you are able to talk with me and if so what method of communication would be preferable.

感謝: Thank you very much in advance for your time and insight.

Thank you so much for the time and thanks in advance for the time of your son.

I look forward to hearing from you soon, Eric. Thank you so much for the favorable consideration.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.

催促求職結(jié)果: I am eager to know if we have any updates regarding my application.

Henceforth it is definitely top on my list.

It would be very helpful to know where I stand with CSSEA to conclude on my conversations with them.

I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position. Please feel free to contact me at any time if further information is needed. My cell phone number is (555) 111-1111.

(求職信要表現(xiàn)出對該職業(yè)的熱情)

I look forward to hearing from you next week regarding your final decision. Feel free to reach out to me beforehand with any questions or concerns. Again, my phone number is 555-555-5555.

職位相當(dāng)或者接近時(shí),如何寫催促信?

It is quite doable now that we have built a solid customer base for courses in overall writing skills.

This may sound ambitious, but what do you think of launching it on April 21st?(不要表現(xiàn)的頤指氣使,也不要把自己位子放得太低)

I am happy to coordinate any assistance you might need to complete the task in three short days. Just let me know.(表示出自己愿意進(jìn)行協(xié)助)

(若還有什么要說)By the way,…(更合適)

(適當(dāng)激勵(lì),不過要考慮運(yùn)用具體情況)Keep up the excellent work!

寫郵件自己需要注意的地方:

Just to remind you that …語氣略生硬,不太好

可以改為kindly remind that …

Q: 我在想I開頭的句子會不會讓老師或者對方覺得有點(diǎn)太自我了[撇嘴] 咋改呢?

A:it 無人稱句式,本來就是推卸責(zé)任的做法,不會被感到自我的。要是句式覺得單一可以用物做主語,或者用通稱。

你要為自己的真實(shí)需要服務(wù),別瞎編啊。如果借傘你表達(dá)自己的背景還是沒有練習(xí)到。我們都通常覺得自己乏善可陳,無任何內(nèi)在價(jià)值值得人家來提攜,這種思維也是可以通過刻意練習(xí)不斷思考來突破。我每次寫也都是戰(zhàn)戰(zhàn)兢兢覺得會不會是浪費(fèi)別人時(shí)間,但反倒這種缺乏自信的心態(tài)下,更容易啰嗦,因?yàn)槟憧傆X得篇幅可以彌補(bǔ)實(shí)質(zhì)的“缺乏”(因?yàn)槲矣X得networking emails如果是發(fā)給HR的話,不需要寫那么多具體信息,人家沒時(shí)間看,也不會看,要看的話會看簡歷)要有自信同時(shí)又積極勤奮的思考以做到最清晰流暢嚴(yán)密的表達(dá)。我的意思是盡量用自己的案例,這樣你以后可以用得上,如果北京大學(xué)畢業(yè)的一般不怎么好好陶瓷也有人回信。但是如果你真的以自己的角度寫,就會很認(rèn)真的思索自己的光彩之處,然后盡力表達(dá)出來,又會努力控制使其簡明。我的點(diǎn)就是說不要潛意識里pick the easy way out.

Q: 假設(shè)不知道對方叫什么。用To whom it may concern,是否合適?

A: Don't write to people whose name you don't know with interview request.

Q: 想問一下,touch base是可以用在任何場合的嗎,寫信的目的可以用 I am touching base with you to ...

A: 一般沒有base 就不能說你在touching base.

Help someone do something

hear from 接到某人電話來信的意思 Learn from 是獲知獲悉 Know from 可以表達(dá)獲得但是味道不大對 Hear of 是聽說 Hear of something from someone 這個(gè)是和hear from someone 不一樣的

先陶瓷一點(diǎn)做點(diǎn)small talk,不然吹捧了半天未進(jìn)入正題讓人有點(diǎn)不知所措,不用寫那么多。她的意思不是你的來意寫的太簡單而是出來的有點(diǎn)遲。要開門見山,有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)small talk 自我介紹然后迅速進(jìn)入正題

你同時(shí)也可加半句:I wonder if you would be so kind to allow me to visit , for I would very much like to admire close-up how such a legendary place is run and talk about cooperation possibilities.

去填表~感覺寫信也是為了混臉熟

----對 但是一般申請人太多他們只看一眼,你能 找到她電郵地址與否是個(gè)大問題,所以這種方法也是對有決定要人與否的大總監(jiān)有意義。跟獵頭寫信也可以,還要多問好問題。

If you heard of any vacancy in this field, would you mind referring me the information or pointing me in that direction ? That would be much appreciated .

當(dāng)然這個(gè)問題也最好在見面時(shí)或之后問,一般人能隨手幫忙都會很愿意。

我是想客套一下,但是我不需要她的回答了誒,因?yàn)槲乙呀?jīng)拿到信息了,到時(shí)候面試過了就過了,沒過就沒過......這種應(yīng)該怎么客套?

---- I would like to work on this or that project in a research assistant 's capacity.西方人主要看你的研究興趣。這種我認(rèn)一個(gè)lord,你干啥我跟著你的思維不太好表達(dá)。

怎么客套:I am interested in joining your research team,Depends on how you would like the relationship to go about.

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