Students usually go to school in different ways. In our school, most students get to school between 7:30 and 8:00 in the morning. Some arrive on foot, and some take the bus. However, eighty percent of the students arrive in their parents’ cars. The entrance to the school is crowded and dangerous. I think cars are the main problem. I think there are a few things we can do.
學生們上學的方式通常多種多樣。在我們學校，大多數(shù)學生在早上7:30到8:00之間到校。有些人步行，有些人乘公交。不過，百分之八十的學生是父母開車送行。去學校的入口又擁擠又危險。我認為汽車是主要問題，我認為我們可以做一些事情。

First, we should encourage students to take the bus or walk to school. Taking the bus can help cut down air pollution. Walking is healthier, too. Next, what should parents do if their children have to come to school by car? I think their parents should park their cars far away from the school entrance. For example, they can park their cars at the end of the street. Finally, in my opinion, when parents park dangerously in front of the school entrance, they will be punished and have to pay some money—a fine (罰金). This way, they will be cautious and think twice before parking.
首先，我們應該鼓勵學生乘公交或步行上學。乘公交有助于減少空氣污染，步行也更健康。其次，如果孩子必須乘車上學，家長該怎么辦？我認為他們的父母應該把車停在離學校入口很遠的地方。例如，他們可以把車停在街道的盡頭。最后，在我看來，當家長們把車危險地停在學校門口時，他們將受到懲罰，并必須支付一些罰金。這樣一來，他們在停車前會小心謹慎，三思而后行。

In a word, cars are making it dangerous for students to enter the school safely. Therefore, encouraging students to walk to school, or asking parents to park away from the school gate could solve this problem.
總之，汽車使學生安全進入學校變得很危險。因此，鼓勵學生步行上學，或者讓家長把車停在遠離學校大門的地方，可以解決這個問題。