Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express yourthanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should writeat least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
解析:
本篇表達對老師的感謝,語氣上要注意更加正式。因為是師生關(guān)系,第一段除了交代寫信目的,還需要進行自我介紹,讓老師知道你是誰。第二段展開具體內(nèi)容,即老師在你考大學的過程中給予了哪些幫助;第三段重申目的,表達感謝之余,可以加上自己的決心或?qū)ξ磥淼囊?guī)劃。
信件寫作注意格式,要有稱謂,正文,敬語和署名。
Dear Miss Wang,
How are you? My name is Li Ming, one of yourformer students. I am writing to tell you the good news that I have beenadmitted to the college I have dreamed of. And I shall extend my heartfeltappreciation to you for the guidance and help you have rendered me.
First, youhave provided me useful information of the college that I applied for. Second,it is you who strengthened my confidence and kept encouraging me to pursue mydream when I almost gave up. Furthermore, you have devoted your valuable timeto solving my problems in my English course.
The collegelife opens a new chapter of my life, and I will do my best to make itmeaningful. Please accept my gratitude, now and always.
Best regards,
Li Ming
譯文:
親愛的王老師,
您好嗎?我寫信是想要告訴你一個好消息:我被理想的大學錄取了。在此,我想要對您的指導(dǎo)和幫助表達我衷心的感謝。
首先,您為我提供了我所申請學校的有用信息。其次,是您在我快要放棄的時候增強了我的信心,一直鼓勵我追求自己的夢想。再者,您花費了很多寶貴的時間,解決我在英語課程方面的難題。
大學生活翻開了我人生的新篇章。我將盡我所能讓我的大學生活過得有意義。請接受我無盡的感激之情。
最誠摯的問候,
李明