具體方法如下:
四六級(jí)作文要求字?jǐn)?shù)差不多,120~150字150字是一個(gè)什么樣的概念?撐破天十一二個(gè)長(zhǎng)句子就結(jié)束了,一來(lái)方便,二來(lái)可以博得閱卷老師眼球,豈不雙收?
可是我只會(huì)寫 "It's better to......;It's important to......;In my opinion.....;There is......As an old saying......"怎么辦??不舉例子了,"I think..."的使用頻率有多高就不說(shuō)了……

只會(huì)寫這些短句子或者比這些好一點(diǎn)怎么辦呢?其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單,耍一些花招,把短句變成長(zhǎng)句,騙過(guò)閱卷老師的眼睛,讓他盡可能給你好的分?jǐn)?shù) 因?yàn)椋?/p>
四六級(jí)閱卷老師只有不到30s的時(shí)間看你的試卷就要給你一個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)。如果你文中出現(xiàn)垃圾詞,你的能力就會(huì)被估算出來(lái),那么這篇文章就會(huì)被大打折扣,給你一個(gè)毫不留情的分?jǐn)?shù)以保證其與你在前面所做題得到的分?jǐn)?shù)是成正比的(就算你前面做的很好也沒(méi)有用,老師看不到前面的成績(jī),只能以你作文的水平做個(gè)估算),這樣閱卷老師的評(píng)分水平就不會(huì)超過(guò)機(jī)器限定的某一個(gè)范圍以保證他來(lái)年可以繼續(xù)參加閱卷(評(píng)判閱卷老師的評(píng)分能力該是用了機(jī)器學(xué)習(xí)方法。
短句變長(zhǎng)句的三原則:
要先想好要寫的短句,然后對(duì)這個(gè)短句進(jìn)行以下加工
三原則之間可以相互疊加使用
原則一:背景原則:
來(lái)個(gè)例句:Along with the remarkable / tremendous advancement of the science and technology in the contemporary society.隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)在當(dāng)代社會(huì)的飛速發(fā)展
背景就是:Along with the remarkable / tremendous advancement of.......隨著....巨大的進(jìn)步,....怎么樣。把這句話套在這里:Along with the remarkable advancement? of China's economy,the price of housing is higher and higher.
當(dāng)然可能有更好的套用方法,順便再添油加醋:Along with the remarkable advancement in the science of vaccination has yielded a much-improved quality of life and health among the world, by eradicating and help in fighting many infectious diseases.
相信你一定會(huì)在考試的時(shí)候想方設(shè)法套用這句話的,無(wú)論什么題目,總能把這個(gè)帽子加進(jìn)去。
原則二:帽子原則:
例句:Nobody could fail to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals today.沒(méi)有人可以否認(rèn)這樣的事實(shí)那就是:越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人喜歡慶祝一些西方節(jié)日。
帽子就是:Nobody could fail to notice the fact that.....沒(méi)有人可以否認(rèn)這樣的事實(shí)那就是......
上面這句話與以下短語(yǔ)等價(jià):
There is no denying that......
It is widely accepted that......
It is universally acknowledged? that.....
It can't be denied that.......
這就意味著隨時(shí)換著句子用而不被發(fā)現(xiàn),就算發(fā)現(xiàn)了也沒(méi)什么的,因?yàn)樗酱_實(shí)不在高中了。
對(duì)了,再介紹一個(gè)很管用的帽子:
帽子二:As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily / the Economist / the Chinese Academy of Science....正如《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》/《經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人》/ 中科院 所做的趣味調(diào)查一樣......
至于后面該加些什么就看情況而定了,只要你想加就一定能加的。
假設(shè)我們作文題目是關(guān)于旅游的,我們就可以這樣寫:
As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily,people in expanding numbers are getting interested in traveling.正如《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》所做的趣味調(diào)查一樣,越來(lái)越多的人對(duì)旅游感興趣。
原則三:插足原則:
顧名思義,這里主要講的就是往句子里插入單詞,句子,短語(yǔ)。
首先介紹幾個(gè)萬(wàn)能的插足詞:
我認(rèn)為:for my part , from my own perspective..
程度狀語(yǔ):undoubtedly(毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)),definitely(清楚地)ps:插足條件:主謂之間
例句:
Writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man.寫作,毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),讓人變得嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
Nobody could fail to notice the fact that the Internet , from my own perspective,is becoming increasingly popular.在我看來(lái),沒(méi)有人可以否認(rèn)那就是互聯(lián)網(wǎng)正變得越來(lái)越受歡迎。(這句話把原則二和三用在一起了)
最后加一個(gè)三原則一起使用的例子:
Along with the tremendous advancement of the science and technology in contemporary city,nobody could fail to notice the fact that writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man. 隨著科技在當(dāng)代城市的飛速發(fā)展,毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),沒(méi)有人可以否認(rèn)一個(gè)事實(shí)那就是寫作使人嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
當(dāng)你把幾個(gè)想法先用短句描述一遍,在加上帽子,背景什么的,要能合在一起最好了,不能也沒(méi)關(guān)系;而且這些方法可以反復(fù)用而不出現(xiàn)重復(fù),但很可惜背景法則只能用一次。
三原則到這里就介紹完了,接下來(lái)該說(shuō)說(shuō)“垃圾詞“怎么處理了
什么是垃圾詞?這個(gè)要看我們自身的水平,對(duì)于我來(lái)說(shuō),寫作文時(shí)第一想到的詞全部都是垃圾詞!都要換!
這里只舉一些我常用到的垃圾詞和處理方法了(處理方法就是換掉他):
垃圾詞:替換詞(不同詞語(yǔ)之間我都用分號(hào)隔開了,這樣更容易看清楚一些)
think? :assume;Hold the idea that+句子; maintain; conceive;as far as I am concerned ;? from my point of view
people:individuals; characters; folks
some/many : a slice of; an ocean of ;? a multitude of;? a host of; a variety of;? a diversity of; various; diverse
very:decidedly; intensely; overwhelmingly; exceedingly
important:play a critical role in day-to-day life; fundamental and elementary; of great importance; significant--significance;? indispensable,and crucial
advantage: benefits; dominance; superiority; merit
disadvantage:? shortcoming; deficiency;? handicap; flaw
in my opinion:for my part; in my personal sense; from my point of view;? as far as I am concerned; from my own perspective
for example:taking a look around,we can find examples too numerous to list:? ? ? ? (這里注意隨便舉一個(gè)例子就好,不要舉的太多,看句子意思就明白了)
more and more people:people in expanding numbers
be interested in: sth appeals to sb ; sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb
帶來(lái)壞的影響:exert a negative and unfavorable impact on......
帶來(lái)好的影響:exert a favorable and positive impact on........
今天這份寫作速成攻略,在考試前每天溫習(xí)一遍寫作,妥妥的~
