It is Wednesday, the second day after Tomb-Sweeping Holiday. I organized the students to correct the passage written by some students about their holiday on Tuesday.
First, choose a com from He Menglu,who cant use the past tense. eg I am stayed in home and sleep the whole day. Before we discussed, i ?found several ones had pointed out the mistakes.So I spoke a little.
Then, Show two good compositions from Yan Jiayao and Xue Yuting. One described common true life in the holiday. She thought she felt boring because of homework and extra classes at school. The purpose to discuss it is i need to tell how to express yourself in writing. and help to change the opinion to busy and boring life.The other is optimistic. the girl thinks she spent a happy holiday.and whatis more,the student have a good plan to complete it. She emphasized a happy activity ---flying kites. I Shared my ideas with the students.
In all, the class goes well. It can lead them to better writing!
