第8天兩個response的差異:(R1: response 1; R2: response 2)第一組差異:

R1.If you look at it that way

R2:Looked at from a broad historical perspective,

R1:But should we keep on doing this?

R2:Whether this process should continue is a question that requires careful consideration.

R1: If you go to Africa, for example, you can see......

R2:This can be seen in parts of Africa, for example, where large nature......

Note: Academic style is impersonal. Avoid overusing personal pronouns (e.g. I, you, we).

第二組差異:

R1: the conflict between humans and animals is really bad.

R2: the conflict between humans and animals is particularly problematic.

Note: Avoid emotive words (e.g. bad, terrible, adore.)

第三組差異:

R1: it’s true that......

R2: it is true that.....

注意can't的非縮寫形式是cannot; 不是can not.

Note: Avoid contacted forms (e.g. isn't; won't ) and the words: get, a lot of, and really.