結(jié)構(gòu)正確
用詞準(zhǔn)確
Water is important.
對(duì),但太過簡(jiǎn)單。
修改: Water is essential in our life.
再如:There is no denying that water is essential in our life.
結(jié)構(gòu)正確
用詞準(zhǔn)確
Water is important.
對(duì),但太過簡(jiǎn)單。
修改: Water is essential in our life.
再如:There is no denying that water is essential in our life.