Process diagrams show how something is done or made. They always show steps/stages.

1.Try to write 4 paragraphs - introduction, summary of main points, 2 detail paragraphs.

寫四段—1 intro、1 總結(jié)、 2 細節(jié)段

2.Write the introduction by paraphrasing the question (rewrite it by changing some of the words).

intro主要就是改寫題目（改一些題目中的詞匯，所以積累同轉(zhuǎn)很重要??！后續(xù)考慮更新）

3.For your summary, first say how many steps there are in the process. Then say where/how the process begins and ends (look at the first and last stages).

對于總結(jié)段，首先闡述圖中有幾步，然后寫這個流程是如何開始和如何結(jié)束的。

4.In paragraphs 3 and 4, describe the process step by step. Include the first and last steps that you mentioned in the summary, but try to describe them in more detail or in a different way.

第三第四段，分步描述流程圖中的內(nèi)容。同時，內(nèi)容包括：在總階段中提到的開始和結(jié)束（但是更細節(jié)的描述或者換種描述的方面），以及中間的步驟。

5.You could describe the steps in one paragraph, but it looks more organised if you break the description into two paragraphs. Just start paragraph 4 somewhere in the middle of the process.

關(guān)于細節(jié)段的描述，可以占一段，也可以占兩段，但是如果分為兩段會讓整個流程更清晰，那就用兩段吧！！

6.Mention every stage in the process.

流程圖中的每一個流程都要被描述，因為每一個過程都會有分值權(quán)重。

7.Use 'sequencing' language e.g. at the first / second / following / final stage of the process, next, after that, then, finally etc.

在這個過程中，要學會連接詞的使用，比如，after that/which...

8.Times (e.g. past dates) are not usually shown, so use the present simple tense.

時態(tài)的使用：一般使用現(xiàn)在時。

9.It's usually a good idea to use the passive e.g. 'At the final stage, the product is delivered to shops' (because we don't need to know who delivered the product).

通常情況下，用被動是一個好的選擇，因為在流程中（比如某個產(chǎn)品的加工過程），我們并不知道是誰在做這個事情。

Example

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

1.???? 用after which進行連接

Clay is dug up by a digger, after which it is further sieved with/by a metal grid, and then the finer clay is

盡量用被動語態(tài)

2.???? 用and then銜接前后兩步

And then the finer clay is transported on a roller.

3.???? Before進行連接

they are moved into a drying oven to dry for 24 to 48 hours, before the mixture is cut by a wire clutter or is molded into intermediate bricks.

4.???? 用once, after, until引導從句進行銜接

Once dried, the raw bricks are transported into the kiln

5.???? 任何一個設(shè)備后面都可以跟一個where引導的定語從句

The raw bricks are transported into the kiln, where the bricks are heated up under moderate temperature (200 ℃-980 ℃).

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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Introduction:

改寫1：The diagram shows procedures of producing bricks for construction.

改寫2：The diagram shows how the bricks for construction purpose are produced.

In the first stage, clay is dug up by a digger, after which it is further sieved with/by a metal grid, and then the finer clay is transported on a roller.

In the following stage, sand and water are mixed with the clay. The mixture cut by a wire clutter or is molded into intermediate product, before they are moved into a drying oven to dry for 24 to 48 hours. Once dried, the raw bricks are transported into the kiln, where the bricks are heated up under moderate temperature (200 ℃-980 ℃) first, and then they are dried further at higher temperatures ranging from 870 ℃ to 1,300 ℃, after which they are transferred into the chamber for 48 to 72 hours.

In the last step, the finished products are packaged to be finally delivered by a truck to industries that use them.

Overall, the whole process of making bricks has eight steps that begins with the collection of the clay, and ends with the delivery of the finished products to the market.

分析：大部分流程圖都可以分成三個階段：原料采集階段、原料處理階段、成品打包運輸階段

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