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1. Many words in English are derived from other languages.
2. European education system differs significantly from American system.
3. My home town is quite similar to my college town.
4. Technological advances contribute to the progress of many other industries.
5. Certainly, there are benefits of using monitoring technology.
6. Newspapers will continue to be a vital source of information, even in the Internet age.
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Prisons are useless for crime problems and education is a better solution. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Introduction: While I disagree that prisons are unworkable punishment for a crime, I agree that education could be a better solution. (這里的表態(tài)也可以說In my opinion, both prisons and education are effective in tackling crime problems.)
On the one hand, it is necessary to put law violators in prisons for social security and justice.
-prisons deter criminals from committing crimes. If they know they would be punished by law, potential law breakers would think twice about breaking into a building or stealing a car.
-Criminals should be locked up to ensure the safety of other citizens.
- It is fair for victims and their relatives to see the criminals imprisoned.
On the other hand, education can paly a significant role in rehabilitating law offenders.
-As most prisoners are poor-educated, they should receive more knowledge about the law.
-Prisoners should receive education of vocational training, learn personal skills and specific job skills because a criminal record makes finding a job more difficult.
-Education aims to make them better citizens, so they are less likely to re-offend.
