這一篇不僅僅是范文，內容分為四部分。優(yōu)點-問題-思路-范文。
優(yōu)點
這三條是學習每一篇范文都可以體會的哦~
1.思路清晰：段與段之間聯(lián)系緊密。
2.邏輯嚴密：每一段的觀點與支撐很順暢。
3.表達地道：詞匯選擇準確，不low也不裝逼。
問題
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
思路
范文
There is no doubt that education and the learning process has changed since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Though experts systems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion what can be expected is a change of the teachers’ role, but not their disappearance from the classroom.
開頭段：正反面背景介紹。提出觀點：老師應當隨時代改變而不是消失。
Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a child. This, accompanied by the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually contributes to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level the availability of digital books, simulators and other academic materials provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand.
分論點1：電腦使獲取知識更有趣且容易。支撐：兒童，學生。
But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need for human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specifics needs of each individual are. The expertise of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how sophisticated its software is.
分論點2：人與人互動的重要性。支撐：個性化，老師的重要性。
As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather than transmitters of facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are taking places, keep updated and serve as problem solvers in the learning process, thus allowing students to discover the fact for themselves.
分論點3：老師在當今應該怎么做。
To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will continue to play an important role in the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become, there will be no replacement for the human interaction, but in the way haw this interaction takes place.
總結：老師的重要性不容動搖，因為在互動方面的不可替代性。
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