仿寫直播課程筆記

1. 如何寫對(duì)一個(gè)句子?

1. Running enable me more health.(ricky 小凌)

-->Running enables me to become healthier.(考試中更適用)

2. 場景:這個(gè)恐怖電影嚇得我晚上睡不著覺。造句:The horror movie left me couldn't

sleeping at night.(Becky)

--> The horror movie left me sleepless/wakeful at night.

-->Because of the horror movie, I couldn't sleep/fall asleep at night.

3. 2017 saw the government has gradually toughen the rules on website anonymous

comment.(Jaymee)

-->2017 saw the government's toughened rules on anonymous comments on websites.

-->2017 saw the government gradually toughen the rules on?anonymous comments on websites.

-->2017 saw the government gradually toughen the rules on online anonymous comments.

2. 怎樣減少寫作錯(cuò)誤?

Be deliberately, strategically, and proudly dumb.

【每周一段】

一、介紹自己、親人、朋友

1)完全臨?。?/p>

As a boy growing up in a rural area in Guangdong, my father remembers suffering from

various natural and man-made disasters. As a young man, lucky to benefit from the

restoration of gaokao, he became a civil servant after graduating from SCNU. Yet it is

transferring to PICC that put him on track to becoming a successful executive.(savage)

As a boy growing up in the suburbs of Detroit, Adam Grant remembers participating in

springboard diving and aspiring to be a professional basketball player. As an adult, he

hustled his way into the academic circles, becoming the school's youngest tenured

professor at age 28. Yet it is writing the works such as Give and Take, Originals that put

him on track to being famous psychologist and author in America.(李唯軍)


2)臨摹加創(chuàng)新

As the oldest son growing up in a military family, Zhang Xueliang remembered his father’s

longing and high expectations for him. As an adult, after the Japanese assassinated his father,

Zhang Xueliang hustled his way into China’s political stage and became the youngest

warlord in the 1930s. Yet it was the Xi’an Incident he planned and executed in 1936 that enabled him

to become a patriotic general in China’s modern history.(展文娟)

順路學(xué)到的詞:

fire off迅速地給出一連串反饋

hustled his way into the entertainment business 闖入了娛樂界(這里的語境是褒義)

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