12.9雅思寫作

AD結(jié)尾段(30-40)
  • conclusion 1
    restate position+summarize reasons

In conclusion, I reaffirm my conviction that...in that...and...
不能完全重復(fù)第一段內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)改寫

  • conclusion 2
    觀點(diǎn)偏、題目中存在選項(xiàng)——表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)+建議結(jié)尾
    in conclusion, my view is that...
    however, it is recommended that...
特殊題型
  • 絕對詞
    形容詞副詞的最高級 the most important
    概念絕對的形容詞 only never every no

*出現(xiàn)絕對詞的題推薦寫disagree
*第二段作為承認(rèn)最高級別的一般級別
*正面舉例字?jǐn)?shù)不夠的話,利用假設(shè)或?qū)Ρ冗M(jìn)行反面舉例
例:salary
A: 工資最重要+其他不那么重要
D: 工資一般重要+其他更重要

  • 題目分為兩個(gè)部分
    文章開頭段:兩個(gè)部分都要回應(yīng)
    while I agree that...I do not agree that...

positive or negative

Is this a positive or negative development?

  • the proportion of older people is steadily increasing
    開頭:更大的挑戰(zhàn)
    body1: 對政府的經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力
    body2: 年輕人的責(zé)任壓力
    body3: 經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退
    conclusion

advantages outweigh disadvantages

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

  • it is better for children to begin learning a foreign at primary school rather than secondary school
    開頭
    body1: 頭腦更加容易接受
    body2: flexible timetable
    body3: disadvantages 教學(xué)質(zhì)量,對初中的sequent learning
    conclusion

*優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)都要提到,哪個(gè)多就多加一段
*對比舉例 unlike adolescents

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
  • task response:時(shí)間和字?jǐn)?shù),完全回應(yīng)題目的問題
  • coherence and cohesion:分段、連接
  • lexical resource:多樣性(同義轉(zhuǎn)換 詞性轉(zhuǎn)換 固定搭配)
  • grammar range and accuracy:語法正確(時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)、句意完整)、句型多變(簡單復(fù)雜句混合、多種語法結(jié)構(gòu))

coherence:
(1)結(jié)構(gòu)
遞進(jìn):firstly - in addition/what's more - more importantly
平行:firstly - secondly - finally
重要遞減:primarily - apart from that - at last
(2)
thesis
evidence:原因/結(jié)果、代詞、which非限定從
example

lexical:
get - obtain, gain, acquire
know - be informed about, have a good understanding of

vocabulary
facilitate
inhibit
self-consciousness
exposure
innate
harness

Argument

  1. 審題:
    (1)抓出題目中討論的話題
    (2)兩方說法
    (3)根據(jù)兩方說法需要回答什么
    (4)自己的看法
  • Topic: medical costs
    A: free for everyone / B: paid by individuals
    Discussion
    雙方觀點(diǎn)不是完全矛盾的情況下,選擇兩方觀點(diǎn)的結(jié)和
  1. 結(jié)構(gòu)
    開頭段:引出話題+表達(dá)看法
    body1: 討論A
    body2: 討論B(兩段都要客觀討論,沒有I, we, you, 而是they)
    結(jié)尾段:我的看法

字?jǐn)?shù):40+100+100+50

  1. 提綱
  • healthcare and education: government? citizens?


    example
Introduction
  • paraphrase the topic
  • my opinion

(1)paraphrase
方式1:換句子結(jié)構(gòu)
some people argue for...claiming that...while others show their preference for...
方式2:抓主題 背景化
(主語從句)...draws the attention of the public. Some claim that...while others show their preference for...
(2)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)
in my opinion...
my view is that...
I contend that...

alternative
implement
augment 增加

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