11.15-On Writing Well

17 Sports

Expressions

They come flooding automatically out of the typewriterof every scribe (sportswriter) in every press box.

press box? (體育場的)新聞工作室,記者席

a special area or a room at a sports ground where sports journalists sit

Smith was a devout angler, and it was a pleasure to watch him bait his hook and come up with that slippery fish, a sports commissioner, gasping for air.

devout 1.(強(qiáng)調(diào)內(nèi)心信仰的深入與強(qiáng)烈的) 虔誠的

有趣的延伸:Devout is often used to describe religious individuals, but this word also pop ups in the context of sports fans — a fact that may shed some light on the role of sports in today's society. However, while it's usually acceptable for a devout individual to miss work for religious holidays, devout sports fans have a tougher time convincing their boss to let them off for the big game.

2 衷心的,熱烈的? a ~ hope衷心 [真誠] 的希望

devoutly [修飾 hope,believe 等的動詞] 衷心地,熱誠地

angler? 1 釣魚者,釣魚人

辨析:fisherman 通常指把捉魚做職業(yè)的“漁民”,稱垂釣的“雅人”最好用 angler。

2 善用計謀的人,為達(dá)目的不擇手段的人

3 (又作 angler fish) ‘魚’琵琶魚

In sports, all is writ large and writ in concrete.

writ ? 1.法律令狀,書面命令,傳票

2.(the) Holy [Sacred] Writ圣經(jīng)

3.writ((古))write 的過去式.過去分詞

writ 'large? 這里意思 1. easy to see or understand顯而易見的;公然

?Mistrust was writ large on her face.她臉上明顯流露出不信任的神情。

2. (用于名詞后) being a large or obvious example of the thing mentioned 明擺著;公然:

?This is deception writ large.這是明目張膽的欺騙。

Thoughts

The best sportswriters know this. They avoid the exhausted synonyms and strive for freshness elsewhere in their sentences.

What gives the article its depth is that it’s the work of a writer, not a sportswriter.

The ego of the modern athlete has in turn rubbed off on the modern sportswriter.

這一章雖然作者講得和舉例的比較有趣,我還是看得有點(diǎn)困難——我對體育不感冒,加上偶爾出現(xiàn)的體育專業(yè)名詞?;臼锹宰x過去的,不過還是有所收獲。

1.作者說sports is one of the richest fields now open to the nonfiction writer. 許多以嚴(yán)肅書籍著稱的作家都曾寫過這方面的書籍。舉了一些例子,其中一個經(jīng)典是John Updike的“Hub Fans Bid Kid Adieu,”驚訝到我了。約翰·厄普代克竟然也寫體育——我只知道他的長篇小說“兔子四部曲”,還看過幾個精彩的短篇。

2.語言新鮮生動,不然沒人想看。

3.美國體育總是與社會歷史交織在一起,優(yōu)秀的作家會將其結(jié)合起來。

4.寫體育的過程中所要尋找重要的是:人,這些與體育相關(guān)的人們都是一個個普通人,場上場下都有著復(fù)雜困難要去應(yīng)付,深入地了解再寫作更打動人。我沒看過體育文章書籍,只記得看了一些體育相關(guān)電影小說,都是如此,讓我深刻記住的,都不只是寫比賽,更深入的刻畫了賽場上下的人物。

5.作者還舉例了很多體育寫作的正面和反面例子,沒怎么深入看,就不寫了。

6.Observe closely. Interview in depth. Listen to old-timers.Ponder the changes. Write well.

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