在雅思寫作中，中國考生一個巨大的失分點就是觀點展開時寫的內(nèi)容空洞，毫無意義。我經(jīng)常舉這樣的例子：

The Internet provides students with a huge quantity of learning resources. 很多同學接下來的內(nèi)容會是：當學生在學習中遇到問題的時候，他們可以去網(wǎng)上找資料來解答問題。網(wǎng)上的信息量非常大，很多都是很有用的。如果他們的問題能夠解決，他們的學習效率就可能會更高。

好的段落其實是這樣的：

Students could now easily gain access to academic databases through iPad screen, read classical works on Kindle, or watch historic documents on the Internet. These great works are essentially helpful in arousing their curiosity and prepare them with key knowledge necessary for thier academic tasks, like writing an essay, and conducting a scientific research.

給大家一篇細節(jié)寫的非常好的范文！

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what do you agree or disagree?

Given the power and influence of the super rich, it might seem as if social status and material possessions are the new symbols of personal worth, but in everyday life I do not think this is true.

It is apparent that most celebrities today are admired or envied solely for their material wealth or position in various social hierarchies. Many of these people are known to turn their backs on friends, cheat on their spouses or spend their evening over-indulging in alcohol and/or drugs. Things like owning a mansion, driving an expensive car and getting into A-list parties are exalted above old-fashioned values.Ultimately, though, it is the many readers of gossip magazines and celebrity blogs who reinforce these ideas.

Nevertheless, I do believe that in their day-to-day lives most people still believe in values such as honor, kindness and trust. In some way most of us want to form loving families, raise our children to be good citizens, stand up for the downtrodden and protect our communities from harm. We still form friendships, romances and business partnerships based on old-fashioned criteria.When our trust is abused or we are unfairly treated, we see that as a major violation of our relationship and we judge the wrongdoer accordingly.

In conclusion, I believe there is some truth to the notion that status and possessions have superseded old-fashioned values as a measure of a person’s worth. Looking beyond the tabloids, however,it is apparent that most ordinary people have still preserved an old-fashioned conscience.

剛剛的范文，文章不是說明星干很多壞事，而是：

Many of these people are known to turn their backs on friends, cheat on their spouses or spend their evening over-indulging in alcohol and/or drugs.

不是說他們生活很奢侈，而是：

Things like owing a mansion, driving an expensive car and getting into A-list parties are exalted above old-fashioned values.

不是說人們有時還是看重傳統(tǒng)道德，而是：

In some way most of us want to form loving families, raise our children to be good citizens, stand up for the downtrodden and protect our communities from harm. We still form friendships, romances and business partnerships based on old-fashioned criteria.

希望大家體會到了細節(jié)。 請再仔細讀一遍另一個圖文消息中的第三天全文寫作的參考范文，感受一下哪些地方是細節(jié)！

任務三: 請腦洞打開-想的越多越好

1. 游客會幫助傳統(tǒng)文化的傳播。請列舉細節(jié)

2. 電腦游戲?qū)е聦W生上癮的原因。請列舉

3. 學生可以在課外活動中學到很多的技能。請列舉

4. 有一些工作是更適合男性的，有一些是更適合女性的。請列舉

5. 對于交通違規(guī)，有很多的處罰方式。請列舉